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Write down your middle name
Write what you can’t explain
Pop + Push
Pop + Push
Say what you don’t believe
Tell me you’ll never leave
Copy + Paste
Copy + Paste
The real truth will be revealed
Make sure your mouth is sealed
Open + Close
Open + Close
This is a techno song
It won’t take very long
Listen + Like
Listen + Like

2007-11-23 19:18:15 · 13 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music Polls & Surveys

13 answers

i like it.

i can imagine it in my head so yeah.

=]

good work!

2007-11-23 20:36:14 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

personally, I don't like the "this is a techno song it won't take very long" part. It sounds a bit trying to hard to ryme to me..But otherwise its pretty catchy ;)

2007-11-24 03:21:33 · answer #2 · answered by becoolwithschool 3 · 2 1

um u have the rythm in correct standing...u just need better lyrics think bout it more think deep n it will come to u n wen u read it to urself it will flow like water...thats how i knew my poems/w.e were gud enuff

2007-11-24 03:22:56 · answer #3 · answered by Lavi 3 · 2 1

Thats wonderful girl . By the way my names ani and my email is ani_redstar@yahoo.com . pls send me some more rymes.

2007-11-24 03:25:51 · answer #4 · answered by Ani 1 · 2 2

I don't get the copy + paste reference... or any of them at that.

2007-11-24 03:21:51 · answer #5 · answered by Bob 2 · 2 2

nope

2007-11-24 03:21:32 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2 2

no, it is a little bit too silly

2007-11-24 03:21:22 · answer #7 · answered by Heather 5 · 2 2

No. the next line should be DELETE+DELETE

2007-11-24 03:22:17 · answer #8 · answered by Peter H 3 · 2 2

noooooooo

2007-11-24 03:20:37 · answer #9 · answered by Gilberto M 2 · 2 2

i'll pass on this one.

2007-11-24 03:43:47 · answer #10 · answered by ♥Charmed One♥ 7 · 0 2

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