Just part of it:
Been trying to convince myself it's all in my head
Been trying to take a break to retune
I feel as if apacolypse is pending
I feel a sense of impending doom
A neuron misfire, it's all in my head
Even if it comes to a fiery end
I'll still be thinking of you
All I think of is you
There is a gaping hole in my universe
Been trying to find a way to renew
I can't find a way out but self medicating
All I think of is you
I'm still thinking of you
2007-11-23 12:21:18 · 9 answers · asked by pistonclash 1 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Music ➔ Lyrics
By the way, I've never written music to be popular. If I can entertain a crowd in a local bar I am happy.
2007-11-23 12:41:46 · update #1
you see.. if you've been listening to modern music, you'd know that nowdays ANYTHING is a given as long as the tune is listen-able. and hasn't anyone told you that since words dont matter, u dont have to make YOURS sound like the quintessence of wikipedia.com ?
if the listener can't tell what ur saying anyway, then what's the whole point of this question?
2007-11-23 12:35:27 · answer #1 · answered by hopeful2010 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Wow! You're off to a great start! I like the contrast between the apocalyptic images and "thinking of you". Keep it up!
I like the lines like "neuron misfire" and "self medicating".
2007-11-23 20:24:30 · answer #2 · answered by MNL_1221 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It has baby step potential. I think the artist is too confused partly because he wants to sing some cool lines. This work needs a lot of work...so get back to work
2007-11-23 20:27:30 · answer #3 · answered by JOHN 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I'm sorry it sounds depressing. Maybe the words like apocalypse, impending doom, self-medicating and fiery end, makes it all sound so hopeless.
2007-11-23 20:26:54 · answer #4 · answered by didderjiddit 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think that I need 2 hear the rest of the song.
2007-11-23 20:26:04 · answer #5 · answered by Bevi J 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
sounds good to me, considering some of the other songs don't even make a bit of sense. i don't even see how some of these songs make it on the charts. keep up the good work.
2007-11-23 20:38:12 · answer #6 · answered by spacery 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Yeah the lyrics are good, can't wait to hear it on the radio one day:)
2007-11-23 20:25:05 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
its ok,, but dude get the meds adjusted
2007-11-23 20:24:41 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
not feeling it
2007-11-23 20:25:57 · answer #9 · answered by prettyqtpatti 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋