write me a poem about pain?

Question

make it funny, no nasty perverted stuff. too heavy or deep,

Answer 1

when i fall, it really stings,
I'm always tripping over things.

but if i cry or yell in pain,
surely it will start to rain.

and if it rains, and i get soggy
i know for sure I'll feel groggy!



sorry not very good but I'm not much of a poet!


ouch that hurt, its very sore.
Ive trapped my finger in the door.
i think its a doctor ill be needin'
cos my finger wont stop bleedin'!

Answer 2

What, no please...
The more it hurts
the more you squeeze.
The tears come rolling down my face
at your seeming lack of grace
to ask politely to help you out
writing a poem wi' nowt taken out.


I once hurt a girl
who was lovely and sweet.
The only problem was
her big plates of meat.
We dined and romanced
till we fell in love,
We were so well suited
like a hand in a glove.
One day I told a lie
about how much I'd spent
My nose grew an inch
Knew I should repent.
The lies added up
and as you know
If the truth you don't tell
your hooter will grow.
It gained two more inches
in a short space of time.
My sweetheart found out
that I'd been dishonest again
so she asked me to leave
her faced lined with pain.
Our hearts did both break
for young love had been true
But as time went by
my thirst grew and grew.
Alcohol my old friend
it had been so long
and I traded in love
for wine's Sirens song.

Answer 3

Pain that hurts me deep within,
it shows through my daily life.
It severs me deep,
just like your love,
that you have failed to give.
Where were you when i needed you most,
I just needed you here with me.
Tell me now was that too much,
for even me to ask?!
Or do you have more important things,
someother dinky task.
I thought that i could trust just you,
but apparently thats not right.
So now you wonder why I walk away,
my face completly streaked.
Not because you hurt me so,
I would never show you those tears.
I cry because i read you wrong,
Your pain from head to toe.
So don't you beg me back to you,
it will never work again.
I've turned around and walked away,
and not even you could stop me now.

Answer 4

So mama - you always told me
sin was a different crime

You may not go to jail
...but you'll be still be doing time

But mama, can you tell me
if you suffer for your deeds...

...or live in peace and serenity
being catered for your needs

I think it may be the latter...
...so I'll take my leave right away

I thought - no...suspected
that it really was pointless to pray.

c. i.t.rose (1994) - pg. 311 'The Giggling God'

Pain is never funny. And suicide? Well...

Answer 5

Agony
Like a sea anemone
creeping in on me
When I walk into a tree.

Excruciating
I say, verbatim
That it hurts like Armageddon
When I get that feeling on

Television
That pains my sense so
In dulci jubilo
And other things, oh!

Exquisite
Illicit
Indesit
They are the best

And by the by
If you say I
can whip you till my heart's content
I will foment

Revolution!
And in conclusion
I'm a Yorkshire man!
And we like sheep.


(need some help with the last line)

Answer 6

He clasps the willy with crooked hands
Close to the a.ss in lonely lands
Ringed with the anal world he shags
The wrinkled crap beneath him crawls
He watches from his mountain balls
And like a thunderbolt he falls

Answer 7

Theirs a pain in my leg
My foots turning blue
I've got deep vein thrombosis
When i'm dead i'll miss you!

Answer 8

i think you should write it yourself.

just think of it as a snapshot - like you are taking a picture, try to desribe what pain might look like.

I think it is wrong to have other people do your homework for you

how are you going to learn anything if everyone else does your work for you.

when you grow up and have a job you don't get paid for what everyone else does, you get paid for what YOU DO -- AND!! how other people respond toyou.

Answer 9

I sat on a couch
And thought, oh! Ouch!
So I moved a little to the right,
Then I sat there feeling tight
And put it down to a bad slouch.

Answer 10

This one ,
Let it rain, let it rain
Let it wash away my pain
Sun, behind these clouds you will stay
Let me learn from this one more day

Drops of life, fall to the ground
Coming down, down, down, they are earth bound
Fill the creeks, rivers, and lakes
Let the flowers drink, no matter how much rain it takes

thats only one i got ..