When I ask
the petals of the flowers
of the world
to lend themselves to me
so my arms were as tender
as you deserve,
you may know.
And when I seek out
the branches of the trees
of the world
to forsake themselves to me
so your skies will be shaded
as you deserve,
you may know.
And when I say
that my heart has fleeced
gold
from the sun
to shine for you
you will know
that you are loved
As you deserve.
2007-11-23 11:23:27 · 30 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
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2007-11-23 11:23:41 · update #1
I know...
Peace.
2007-11-23 11:26:41 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Very good Buk. The words in that are so meaningful ! When the right woman comes along, I'll know !
2007-11-23 19:48:24 · answer #2 · answered by gambleb54 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well Buk, I haven't been on here in a few days. I just popped in to take a peek.... and to see words as beautiful as these... You have just made my night my friend!!!!!
Absolutely beautiful Buk!!
2007-11-23 19:49:04 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
The Pen is Mightier than The Sausage!
2007-11-23 19:47:10 · answer #4 · answered by Kentucky Dave 6 · 9⤊ 0⤋
Softly seething, surreal breathing..
Ignite the cannon with sphagnum lanthum..
Laud the armies of diphthongs with your superannuating Diphtheria..
And I will ever be your combustive tablature of igneous geometries.
2007-11-23 19:49:33 · answer #5 · answered by SHARKY Xl 5 · 2⤊ 1⤋
WOW!!! Beautiful Buk!!!
2007-11-23 19:48:51 · answer #6 · answered by Nurse Susie ♥ hugs 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful and touching. That made a lump in my throat.
2007-11-24 06:15:59 · answer #7 · answered by barbwire 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful! Did you write that yourself? You have a duo personality, huh?
I'm more than impressed...I'm proud to know you !
2007-11-23 19:51:19 · answer #8 · answered by Boopsie 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Geez...Thanks Buk! You really made me feel loved. I don't think i'm gonna need my medication today. =)
2007-11-23 23:30:07 · answer #9 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Sniff, sniff......that's beautiful Buk....brought a tear to my eye.
2007-11-23 20:11:33 · answer #10 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Your sister is torturing your poor pants and you're writing poetry? What kind of twisted family do you have?
2007-11-23 19:39:48 · answer #11 · answered by Anonymous · 5⤊ 1⤋