They tell me that i'm lost
you've caught the curse my dear
of the writers block
it happens when your too scared
Thats when you try too write
nothing comes out anymore
or you just repeat words
that have all been done before
it's when you dont know who you are
or what your trying to acheive
it's when you dont believe in yourself enough
to succeed
people look at you like your never coming back
just another dusted mural too hang on the rack
So I accept my fate of losing my dreams
And I throw away the leftovers of the real me
And i'm a statue now with no heart
Someone carved me into failure from the start
I have no talents
I have no faith
I have nothing too say before I hit the grave
I have no meaning
and it almost seems i have no soul
because i dont want to be famous anymore
yeah i dont want to be famous anymore
2007-11-23 07:53:23 · 22 answers · asked by Anonymous in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Definitely 9/10! That's so awesome!
-HeartBrokenForever (Diane N)
2007-11-23 07:57:25 · answer #1 · answered by ♫Di [Pro-Love, Anti-Hate]♫ 7 · 9⤊ 0⤋
8
2007-11-23 08:00:13 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
8
2007-11-23 07:57:32 · answer #3 · answered by peace.live.love.laugh 4 · 4⤊ 0⤋
7
2007-11-23 07:56:58 · answer #4 · answered by The Chosen One 5 · 4⤊ 0⤋
How about a rewrite instead?
On Migosh I'm lost
My writing can no longer talk
I guess I got the writers block
In my mind few words are aired
happens when I'm scared
Nothing then comes out right
When then I'm tryin' to write
Now then you grieve
As writing to hard to achieve
In defeat you conceed
That you can't succeed
You put your writes on the rack
Depressed you lament
You lack faith in your talent
For nothing is coming back
Not knowing whom you are
When you write just at par
Of words there's no more
All the same as before
Losing yourself you deems
Forgeting effort you gave
You put writes to the grave
For you can't write your dreams
You are deeming
You lost all meaning
You lost your roll
You feel like a lost soul
Not writing anymore
You wonder what it's For
Famous goal is no more!
Well To Answer the lack of word problem
get a Theasaurus! Note the variety of words I used in the rewrite!
2007-11-23 10:20:09 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 3⤋
It's alright, maybe a 7. It would help if I knew I the song sounded like, but great job anyways.
2007-11-23 07:58:46 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
9 1/2 it was very good
2016-05-25 03:17:30 · answer #7 · answered by ? 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It sounds pretty awesome to me! So I give it a 8 =D have a great weekend.
2007-11-23 08:00:08 · answer #8 · answered by Kassie D 5 · 3⤊ 0⤋
3 / 10
2007-11-23 07:57:02 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 4⤋
i think that would be an awesome rock song. i could see stained or lincoln park and such singing those lyrics. great job:)
sorry a 9 because im not sure what area of music your shooting for..
2007-11-23 07:59:29 · answer #10 · answered by Lucky 5 · 4⤊ 0⤋