Someone
I'm looking for someone not afraid to share how they feel
Somebody who won't pretend, but instead reveal
Someone who I can run to, they'll shield me in the rain
Someone who loves my company and I will feel the same
Somebody who's very special in each and every way
Somebody that I will wish for each and every day
It may seem that I ask for much but it's just so easy to do
But I can't help the way I feel
When I'm so in love with you
2007-11-22 03:33:41 · 11 answers · asked by babyGirl* 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
wow.. i'm like... wow.
lucky guy who's gonna receive it. :)
2007-11-22 03:44:54 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it! I cant belive no body has commented as yet! Cheecky people! lol I think ya ending could do with some consideration, it sort of jumps into I love you, instead build upon it some how, then declare the i love you! Good work though! You should think of getting it published! lxxx
2007-11-22 11:37:32 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice rythmn, nice rhyme..u did a great job, think about entering it in the american poets society contest go 2 their web page, id say u got a good shot at placing!
2007-11-22 11:37:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
Lovely! Keep writing and check out some of my work.
2007-11-22 11:37:32 · answer #4 · answered by Mary 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's a very beautiful, romantic poem...
2007-11-22 14:10:22 · answer #5 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
lovely
2007-11-22 11:36:58 · answer #6 · answered by linz172 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
it's great, your poem touch my heart deeply because i'm searching for this someone
2007-11-22 11:57:32 · answer #7 · answered by russia 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that poem was so beautiful
2007-11-22 12:10:46 · answer #8 · answered by khaseem 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that was really good your a good poet
2007-11-22 11:37:57 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
can I borrow that .......just kidden
2007-11-22 12:13:13 · answer #10 · answered by saveitok 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋