Please can someome check the grammar and punctuation in the following paragraph?

Question

To this end, I would like this individual investigated and dealt with appropriately as without addressing his attitude and behaviour I believe that he will continue to act in a way that to me is a flagrant disregard to the standards we are entitled to expect from our medical practitioners, but more importantly, I believe that he poses a potential danger to women, including women in his care.

Answer 1

To this end, I would like this individual investigated and dealt with appropriately. If his attitude and behaviour are not addressed, I believe that he will continue to act in a way that flagrantly disregards the standards we are entitled to expect from our medical practitioners. More importantly, I believe that he poses a potential danger to women, especially women in his care.

Answer 2

To this end, I would like this individual investigated and dealt with appropriately, as without addressing his attitude and behaviour I believe that he will continue to act with flagrant disregard to the standards we are entitled to expect from our medical practitioners. More importantly, however, I believe that he poses a potential danger to women, including, but not limited to, women in his care.

Answer 3

To this end, I would like this individual investigated and dealt with appropriately. I believe that unless his attitude and behaviour are addressed, he will continue to act in a way that shows flagrant disregard for the standards we are entitled to expect from our medical practitioners. More importantly, I believe that he poses a potential danger to women, including those in his care.

I made it less wordy and with fewer clauses.

Answer 4

To this end, I would like this individual investigated and dealt with appropriately without addressing his attitude and behaviour.

I believe that he will continue to act with a flagrant disregard to the standards we expect from our medical practitioners.

But more importantly, I believe that he poses a potential danger to women, specifically women in his care.

Answer 5

Furthermore, I suggest that this individual be investigated and dealt with in and appropriate manner. Without addressing his attitude and behavior I feel that he will continue to act with flagrant disregard to the standards we are entitled to expect from our medical practitioners. More importantly, I feel that he poses a potential danger to women in general and especially women in his care.

Answer 6

sounds fine to me