I had the most amazing dream and although I have an idea what it means, I turned it into a piece of prose.
The style plays with wording,structure and occasionally defies rules in order to convey the fluidity of a dream which was realistic but also jumped from place to place and had a surreal and ghostly feel.
GRATEFUL for comments, thoughts and criticisms. Here is the link to the short piece entitled Ramshackle Beach Hut In the Sun
http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/search?q=ramshackle+beach+shack
2007-11-21 21:02:30 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Social Science ➔ Sociology
i think you are a ghost!!!!!!!
2007-11-21 21:13:07 · answer #1 · answered by Jerry S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
As a dream description is really nice, I like some sentences and you convey emotions in a wel structured way...but...sadly, overall I don't like it that much.
2007-11-22 07:44:47 · answer #2 · answered by algunalguien 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Good job, I can feel all emotions. It was kind of hard to read for me though..
But overall I loved the dream! I love dreaming and that would have been an awesome dream for me as well.
2007-11-22 05:23:58 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋