is this a good poem?

yes, sex is no escape.
oh girl, oh girls, please smile to me!
i need your love and your body.

2007-11-21 06:31:33 · 2 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry

sounds good but could be better if you added more details.

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2007-11-23 05:09:11 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋

manusiawi sekali, harmoni kehidupan.

salam ^-^

2007-11-21 15:30:31 · answer #2 · answered by jibril's girl 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋

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