How should I write this sentence?

Question

When they arrived in United States, they were faced with the difference of Asian Chinese and Western culture in United States. They met new people and made new friends who they learn western culture from and they were proud of accomplishing about western culture. From this accomplishment they became self-confident to achieve academic achievements in United States.

Please write as short as you can.

Please help me with this senteces.

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Answer 1

When they arrived in the United States, they were suddenly faced with Western culture, which was extremely different from the Asian Chinese culture they had left behind. Nevertheless, they confidently stuggled to better themselves in their new country, and soon they were proud of their accomplishments, particularly acedemic ones.

Answer 2

When they arrived in the United States, they were faced with the difference of Asian, Chinese, and Western culture. They met new people who taught them about Western culture and soon they became self-confident and were proud of their academic accomplishments in the U.S.

Answer 3

Try it like this
bearing in mind that it's a paragraph, not a sentence.

Arriving in the United States of America, they were faced with the differences of Asian, Chinese and Western cultures. There were new people to meet and new friends to be made from whom lessons and customs of western culture could be learned. Later they would be proud of their accomplishments in acquiring this knowledge. Eventually they gained sufficient self-confidence to enable them to qualify in many academic fields in their new chosen homeland.

Answer 4

well if the audience doesn't know who THEY are it will be confusing no matter how it is written.

Answer 5

summarise it