They were VERY similar.
The Committee (probably esp. Ben Franklin and John Adams) helped make some edits, then the Congress as a whole debated and edited it to produce the final version. But you will find that the basic structure and argument was not changed at all. The most significant changes were:
a) addition of an explicit to specific references to Deity in the preamble and concluding pledge
b) deletion of one major charge against the King, viz., that blaming him for encouraging the SLAVE trade and slavery (the South refused to accept this one)
c) chopping out many details of the section explaining how the colonists appeals to the British people (that is to Parliament) went unheeded
The following three pages ought to help you:
A reconstruction of Jefferson's rough draft:
http://www.duke.edu/eng169s2/group1/lex3/roughpl.htm
The "fair copy" submitted by Jefferson's committee to the Congress:
http://www.duke.edu/eng169s2/group1/lex3/fairpl.htm
A copy of the FINAL version with markings to show how they changed the "fair copy"
http://www.ushistory.org/declaration/document/congress.htm
2007-11-20 23:22:47
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answered by bruhaha 7
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2016-11-12 05:42:00
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answered by rimpel 4
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The Declaration as presented to the Continental Congress did have some changes made before it was finally voted on, the most important being the removal of a reference to Great Britain’s use of slavery, which offended the southern colonies.
2007-11-20 09:53:11
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answered by Anonymous
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Well, Thomas Jefferson wrote the D.o.I. It maay have had a draft or two, but there was only one D.o.I. ever submitted. Are you confusing the Constitution aand the D.o.I.?
2007-11-20 09:30:24
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answered by cameron_m_johnson 4
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They are not, much of the origional version was dropped that is why Ben Franklin wasn't real gung ho
2007-11-20 09:55:44
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answered by Anonymous
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