Is this a good "free verse" poem?

Question

Snowflakes drop all throughout the wintery night.
Decorated trees in the village shine like bright stars.
Tingle, tingle, tingle the bells shimmer smoothly in the distance.
Children sleep quietly through the mist air of quietness.
Enjoyably dreaming about the tremedous gifts;
On a glourious holiday full of spirit.
Nothing more excitng but a reunion with jolly old St. Nick.

Answer 1

could make a good verse if you spell well: excitng, quietly, glourious, and probably make the bells jingle melodiously rather than"tingle" and "shimmer smoothly."
Make the corrections and it will be a remarkable piece.

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Answer 2

Mmmm, if you ask me, not really. But I don't know how old you are. There are a few spelling mistakes, and it is not particularly creative in terms of imagery. There are many clichés (such as "shine like bright stars").
Try working a little more on it. In the first line, you could replace the verb "drop" by another one that would transform the snowflakes into something else and bring a metaphorical dimension. You see what I mean?
Good luck.