Baby Your the love of my life
The Beauty within my Sight
That Brings Upon by light
For your pretty Hairs and Eyes
Which Holds the scent of the bread
THat Brings Pleasesure to my head
For your a Brainy lady
With Love As pure as Chastity
For you are My sweetie and bunny
Whom i cherish like no other Honey.
the bread line is something that only me and my gf know so ignore that part.
i know some parts are corny but i don't care so leave mature comments
2007-11-19 17:39:40 · 1 answers · asked by infusionair 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
not corny but horny... lol
seriously, the poem is a bit stale as a love poem especially, the hair and eyes that "holds the scent of the bread"!! I'd be hesitant to compare a lover's eyes to smell of bread. I'd be damned!!
good luck
2007-11-19 21:47:08 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋