My poem) I dont have time to cry?

Question

I walk to my window and look out at the rain why because the rain drop or my tears the rain cry for me. because I'm so tired of crying my eye can rest now and let the rain drop pure down,I open the door and walk out in to my tears of rain drop falling all over me I look up in the sky and close my eyes and the rain i could feel the rain falling on my heart each drop was like a knot on the door but there was no answer because my heart never answer the knot of the rain drop my heart was to hurt I guess my poor heart did not want the rain to see the tear falling down on my littler red

Answer 1

oh honey. it sounds you have had your heart broken recently.
if this is the case, i'm so sorry. like most people, i can relate.
email me if you wanna talk!

Answer 2

good try.

Too cluttered, doesn't make too much sence even in a metaphorical way.

good try is all I can say.

Answer 3

Good, now that you can't cry, get on with your life.