Do You Like My Poem?

Question

Love is a mystery on
Top of my feet and I
will keep on walking
to loves beat

love messes with your mind
Leaves you no were to hide
Than when all is said and
done leaves you behind

O but love is so
sweet although it hard
To walk to its beat
But if you do it right
With out any fight
than some one might
walk behind


so start your feet
Walking and maybe
You will meat
some one marching
to the same love beat

Answer 1

omg i lovez it! thatz so burtifool. ; >

Answer 2

i personally don't like it..
because i don't like how you don't start a preposition with the new line....

for example....
i think it should be
Love is a mystery on top of my feet
and I will keep on walking
to loves beat -----loves needs an apostrophe--loves'

you can't really start a new line like that....

but if you actually meant it to be like that then i guess...
yeh

i give it a 6

Answer 3

I'd give it a 6 on scale of 1-10.

Answer 4

good poem could probaly be a little better i would give it a 9 out of 10

Answer 5

I give it a high rating, most definatly.
But you need to learn when to you then and than.
Then is a transition words...to put into order i guess you could say.
And than..is comparing.

Answer 6

Not particularly. It's kind of hokey.

Answer 7

mama said if ya cant say nothin good say nothin at all

Answer 8

Could be shorter.