A Tainted Mind?? What do you think??

Question

I've come to a revelation,
after a little contemplation,
and the realization,
that I am Faith.
Ain't nobody but me,
can truly be,
what it is to be.
The world is what it is,
can't nobody stop this,
so don't try to twist,
and tangle,
from different angles,
of this tainted mind,
that is mine,
and it is divine,
cause I'll be just fine.
The battle that I fought,
in me has been brought,
to an abrupt end.
So now I can begin,
a whole new journey,
that you'll soon see,
is the defiance,
of alliance,
within me.
The mind has been notified,
that the heart has lied,
and defied,
what is suppose to be real and true.
Now a girl must do,
what a girl must do.
Acknowledge the few,
that didn't try to stop the rapture,
or capture,
the released,
and unleashed,
wild heart of a mentally inclined,
but spiritually declined,
girl.
This is my world.
And as it has been spoken, from many a time and a time,
but rarely defined,
cause it has been confined,
welcome to…my tainted mind.

Answer 1

Straightforward poem about self-discovery and recognition of
" the few,/that didn't try to stop the rapture,/or capture,/the released,". . . ."spiritually declined girl."
It's a bitter challenge, daring all to "leave me alone" kind of poem. But good thing is that the mind behind it is very sound and logical!

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Answer 2

i like it. there are a couple of spelling errors but nothing too big. the only thing that i get hung up on is the way the flow doesn't really uhh......flow the whole time. other than that, nice! keep working at it. :)

Answer 3

Your poem is like a cry ut for help because you really want to live better for Christ. Did you check out my poetry liked I asked you to?? I really would like to know what you think about it??