sorry mom for all the things i did you wrong
sorry that i grew up way too fast
its too late now thats past
sorry for all the times i made you worry
sorry i grew up in such a hurry
sorry for the times i came home late
sorry my attitude wasnt great
sorry i never got good grades in school
sorry im such a fool
sorry i took the wrong path
sorry i never did the math
sorry i expected too much
sorry i used you as a crutch
sorry for all the time i got high
sorry for all the times i had to lie
sorry i ever said you werent fair
but mostly just thank you for being there
2007-11-19 11:23:19 · 4 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
The language is somewhat literal. The tone, playful, the consonance, "sorry", hyperbolic. Yet the poem uses situational irony with a powerful dramatic effect.
well-done young buddy.
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2007-11-20 21:12:58 · answer #1 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
okay, i'm going to be bluntly honest with you, and i'm probably going to get a million "thumbs down" but whatever.
This was atrocious.
I don't understand half of the things people write these days! Poetry is an art! Not a jumble of random words that simply just "say it"
Where's the imagery? Where's the metaphor?
*sigh* i'm sick of these teen angst poems. ( and i'm not stereotyping teens, in fact, i am one)
and the childish rhyming! Math, path?
are you serious?
If you want real poetry-- look up some of Anne Sexton, Sylvia Plath, Robert Frost.
2007-11-19 19:44:37 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
................wow that was really really good
2007-11-19 19:31:39 · answer #3 · answered by musiclover 1 · 0⤊ 1⤋
sorry it's..............
2007-11-19 19:28:02 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋