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To my sweet sibling lieing in rest
I know I never got to hold you tight
Or wipe away the food from your vest
But i still lie thinking of you every night

You left before our mother gave birth
Left too soon for no reason of your own
Your better of away from this earth
Up there on your precious throne

I wonder how things would be today
As you sit up there high in heaven
I would sit up and watch you play
Celebrating as you turn eleven

I can only imagine your bright eyes
Followed by your beatiful smile
I would of wiped away all those cries
Destroying any trace of sorrowed denail

I weep because you never pulled through
I know how precious you would turn to be
I would of praised everything you would do
I hope your pure spirit shines with glee

I know you look over me everyday
sorry i have only just found out about you
I hope you listen to those precious words i say
I hope you realise that one day il be up there to

Im 17. I recently found out that after i was born, my mother got pregnant, and lost the baby at 5-6 months due to he/she having cancer through his/hers body. I was very upset hearing this, and i wrote a poem for my little sibling.

Answer 1

That was very beautiful. You would have made a great sister and I hope you are dealing ok with this now.