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Prey
The arrows fly by, missed,
My flesh kissed, grazed,
They will persist, hunting me,
I hear grunting, they’re slow;
And I, unwanting to die…run.
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2007-11-19 08:21:14 · 6 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Yes. It was in hunting and fishing. I go too fast sometimes.
2007-11-19 08:26:27 · update #1
I hope you are good at running, because it sounds like they are getting closer and closer.
Good luck!
Like the sounds and rhythm.
2007-11-19 08:24:08 · answer #1 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it. It is especially enjoyable to read out loud.
2007-11-20 04:38:36 · answer #2 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice! great use in different words and the ordering.
2007-11-19 16:26:31 · answer #3 · answered by Silver Phoenix 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Oh! Sebastian!! You Deer, deer boy.
2007-11-20 01:44:09 · answer #4 · answered by Fr. Al 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Hhmmmm!.
More like pray.
2007-11-19 19:09:55 · answer #5 · answered by TWOBOB 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like it and I can actually understand it.
2007-11-19 19:27:39 · answer #6 · answered by Michael A 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋