"When a patient understands what is required from him, what medicine he should take and what habits he should change, this will help him to heal faster and become healthier."
if it is not please what is the right formating?
2007-11-19 07:18:08 · 9 answers · asked by cool D 1 in Education & Reference ➔ Words & Wordplay
Not bad; a little wordy, but not ungrammatical.
Slight edit:
"When a patient understands what medicine he should take and what habits he should change, he will heal faster and become healthier."
Those concerned about sexist language would be happier if this were rewritten in the plural:
"When patients understand what medicines they should take and what habits they should change, they will heal faster and become healthier."
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2007-11-19 07:23:56 · answer #1 · answered by Bruce 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
When a patient understands what is required from him for example, the medicine he should take and the proper habits to adopt he will start to experience faster healing and a healthier lifestyle.
2007-11-19 07:22:35 · answer #2 · answered by bigsky74 4 · 0⤊ 1⤋
When a patient understands what is required of* him, what medicine he should take and what habits he should change, it* helps* him to heal faster and become healthier.
2007-11-19 07:23:11 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
It looks ok, but I would write it like this.
When a patient understands what is required of him, what medicine he should take, and what habits he should change; this will help him to heal faster and become healthier.
I put a comma between (take) and (and), I added a semi-colon between (change) and (this), and I changed (from) to (of).
2007-11-19 07:22:18 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
"When a patient understands what is required of him/her, what medicine he/she should take, and what habits he/she should change, this will result in that patient healing quicker and becoming healthier."
2007-11-19 07:22:41 · answer #5 · answered by David Q 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Looks right to me.
2007-11-19 07:21:02 · answer #6 · answered by psykhaotic 4 · 0⤊ 2⤋
Yes it's correct.
2007-11-19 07:21:21 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 2⤋
its right
2007-11-19 07:21:53 · answer #8 · answered by poshbaby 1 · 0⤊ 2⤋
I think it is perfect!!!
2007-11-19 07:35:10 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 2⤋