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The good times
The bad times
THey wil never end
The bad times will haunt u
The good times will fad
The times u wish u chould change
The times u wish would never be rearanged
Time will never cece to end
And the world will never stop spinning
And some people will just never change
But the pepole that u love the most
Will never hold a gruge or bost
So just let go and never care
Just stop time and breath in air
Don't grow to fast it's not that fun
Just live life and envy no one
For u r the best u that there chould be
So don't be sad
Dont be a baby
You have it better than you can see
If u just stoped to look around and see that life is never bound
It is eternal like love and laugh
It is a star that will always shin
It's somethiing thats not yours or mine
Life is the world
Life is you and me
Life is everyone even the worst Person that u might envey
So just live it and don't question
Because it's to preciuse to wast a second

2007-11-18 15:00:45 · 2 answers · asked by Knockout Lovley 3 in Arts & Humanities Poetry

2 answers

I liked it. Enough to read all of it. And that's saying something because I have no patience and a short attention spa...

2007-11-19 12:08:59 · answer #1 · answered by Really???!!!! 6 · 0 0

It is one good effort but you certainly need to improve your spellings like these:

haunt u
rearanged
gruge
preciuse

good luck

2007-11-20 01:20:28 · answer #2 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0 0

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