Grim looks have steel glares
Emotions driven all sanity away
Some souls have died
I'm victimised the real don't cry
Being attacked for lack of defence
For reasons dark times
The thrill lost where it may once have stood
Don't look bleak
Makes you look weak
Be strong but sweet
Too much sour will make you sick
Some care about you.
2007-11-18 02:34:34 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Thank you, RScott
2007-11-18 18:38:18 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
You moley really understand,
that my soul has really died.
Thanks for a poem so sweet,
As sweet as the one who wrote it!
Too much sour will make me sick,
Too much sweet will make me grumpy.
I am all alone looking oh so bleak!
Love you all for being a great company.
;-)
2007-11-18 02:55:16 · answer #2 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Passionate and from the heart Hills.
2007-11-18 03:20:38 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Moley, very provocative. I especially like the way it ends.
2007-11-18 09:58:57 · answer #4 · answered by Sptfyr 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
That is great, I am horrible when it comes to writing poetry.
Keep up the good work.
2007-11-18 03:11:12 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Pardon my stern critique, but I like it!!!
2007-11-19 00:22:21 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
confused sadness
2007-11-18 09:56:49 · answer #7 · answered by Theta40 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It's sort of dark, but I like it!!!!!
2007-11-18 13:24:06 · answer #8 · answered by Holiday Magic 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice one.
2007-11-18 02:41:12 · answer #9 · answered by ? 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thanks for relating,
2007-11-18 02:46:19 · answer #10 · answered by HaSiCiT Bust A Tie A1 TieBusters 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋