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by TD Euwaite
Copper for a penny
Door knob puller
Does not need to know you
From a scrapyard throne
Disowned by all, but the dogs
A tree frog chirper
Vomit urper
Angry axe you swing
At things you do not understand
And the band does not play for you
The melody in you is screwed
So, delete me little creepy thing
Ring your bell that has no clapper
Just sit there on the crapper
Exercising laws that are not real
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2007-11-17 13:06:33 · 11 answers · asked by TD Euwaite? 6 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
For me friend Penny...
2007-11-17 13:06:53 · update #1
^ ^ ^ ^ D. F. A ^ ^ ^ I am still here! ^ ^ ^ POKEY, ^ ^ POKEY ^ ^
Love them.
For me friend Richard
You is so good at poems, and I appreciate your solidarity brother.
Thanks it was like a metalurgists dream, Iike mines.
2007-11-17 20:24:40 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 0⤋
Wow! How i wish to dedicate this poem to Spider. Miss having her funny, witty answers...
--->I like it so so much. Creatively done, my friend! I find it so hilarious the last part in which you pointed out: "Exercising laws that are not real". Haha! That is one very meaningful mockery. Hope those peeps will now realize just how absurd being such a copper, the beholders of unrealistic laws!!!
;-)
EDIT: I wanna dedicate this poem to moley MOLE HILL too, The Squirrel Cage and so many others whose poems or accounts has been deleted.
2007-11-17 13:35:35 · answer #2 · answered by Dark Dickinsonian 4 · 4⤊ 0⤋
For me a poem has to have rhythm. It would not unavoidably would desire to rhyme whether it needs to hit my thoughts. i think of readability of expression is critical besides. i do no longer desire to 2d wager what i'm examining approximately. I continually seek for what I term "poetic gemstones"in the text textile.
2016-12-16 11:51:22 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Aside from the good point, this is enjoyable to read. Your first two lines are especially fun, and I have to appreciate "Vomit urper." I like the mix of end- and internal rhyme.
2007-11-17 17:55:26 · answer #4 · answered by aggylu 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Penny got zapped ?
how sad...
beliefs confused
with truth
distance always rules,
they make nice but
you will never be
what you hoped
always yearning
in your mind,
give it up, world
is what they define
it is never your line
of verse, you thought
you are one, how silly,
but lost the words
you always wanted
to give...
nothing left but to forgive
and accept the truth...
they make the rules...
lapdog you are,
at best, it is an empty quest...
BON JOUR my sweet pea, hello MOONBELLE...
2007-11-17 20:02:28 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Does it not piss you off rotten!
when you get some prat say.
"don't give up your day job"
When they carn't do a good job sitting on the crapper.
Even when they have a B.A.
2007-11-17 23:28:20 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Cor blimey! I hate these blokes.
EDIT: DFA, thank you my sweet pepper. I will write later.
2007-11-17 19:57:02 · answer #7 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Amen! Thank you for writing this.
2007-11-17 13:39:32 · answer #8 · answered by Marguerite 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
It's kind of sad.
2007-11-18 00:27:58 · answer #9 · answered by Babylove 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
funny poem, good
2007-11-17 18:51:15 · answer #10 · answered by Theta40 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋