I’ve always had trouble getting to school on time, living an hour away from my high school; but living in campus housing would make it a lot easier for me.
2007-11-17 11:26:40 · 3 answers · asked by Anonymous in Education & Reference ➔ Homework Help
No. It should read: I've always had trouble arriving at school on time since I live an hour away. However, residing at the campus would really be helpful.
Mr. M. on "sentence."
2007-11-17 11:35:40 · answer #1 · answered by Humberto M 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It was unfortunate during High School that I lived an hour away, as it caused me to be late more often than not. I am looking forward to living on campus, as it will aide in my studies, since it requires no travel time, but more so there would be no reason for me to arrive late for class.
2007-11-17 11:45:42 · answer #2 · answered by ? 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Grammatically, I think it's acceptable. It's not the best, though. I'd put the "living an hour away from school" part first, closer to what it's explaining. The semicolon is fine.
However, if this is your college essay, I don't know that volunteering a lack of punctuality is the best idea.
2007-11-17 11:46:00 · answer #3 · answered by Julia S 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋