I need to let it fall,
fall far,
fall deep,
where i know it will be forever out of reach.
Is it wrong to be sad,
still.
I think,
i'm horriable,
not worth the time,
a worthless memory.
It was what I learned from love.
It wasn't that to anyone but me,
but it was that.
It's what you think,
what I need you to think.
Empty hope,
desperate glue,
holding so little but so much.
I'm done being pathetic all alone.
I'm finished,
and defeated.
It's about being broken,
the people who shatter,
and the people who chip.
Hallelujah,
to me,
because who else..
do I need?
2007-11-17 11:05:21 · 8 answers · asked by Miss Madeline 3 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I thought it was really good. There were a couple of lines that made me have to read it over again to understand it, but it could be the lack of my comprehension instead. Very good!
2007-11-17 11:14:47 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like it a lot. Great work.
2007-11-17 19:12:38 · answer #2 · answered by the Boss 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
madeline, i think i know exactly what this is about.
the "insperation."
its very good, very deep.
allthough there is no need to have empty hope.
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2007-11-17 19:20:09 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I think it's great
2007-11-17 19:37:03 · answer #4 · answered by Tribe_belly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I love it!
2007-11-17 19:13:38 · answer #5 · answered by Bailey// 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
faaaaaantastic!
2007-11-17 19:13:02 · answer #6 · answered by Yasmin 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
personally...I love it!!
2007-11-17 19:10:10 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
if i say no
2007-11-17 19:12:55 · answer #8 · answered by gcassador 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋