I saw the ghost
Saw her in the window as I walked towards it
Saw her eyes on me
Her insubstantial form
Revealed the room beyond
If I tried
I could see the room clearly, and her not at all
The ghost copied me
Stole my clothes and my actions
Watched me watching her
And when I left
She vanished altogether
But I saw her
I saw the ghost
2007-11-17 04:48:28 · 7 answers · asked by kleptomanic sheep 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
the question is, as always, 'what do you think, and do you have any suggestions?' i would have thought you could work that out.
2007-11-17 04:59:06 · update #1
i think that it is a good thought as i was reading it i came to my own conclusion and then i read the last line and it just confused me.. i think that is needs alittle work but it would be something great... Good Luck with it...
2007-11-17 06:07:49 · answer #1 · answered by Broken Blue Eyes 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like the subject, especially the stealing and copying part.
2007-11-17 05:00:03 · answer #2 · answered by Analyst 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
if it is a puzzle the ghost was your reflection
2007-11-17 04:59:34 · answer #3 · answered by lucassfred 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
well i like the poem that you wrote
2007-11-17 05:03:54 · answer #4 · answered by cabbage 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
and what is the question..............this is not a site for posting poetry intresting as it maybe
2007-11-17 04:56:44 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
im the ghost!
2007-11-17 04:56:16 · answer #6 · answered by Ghost Boy 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
that's pretty good.
2007-11-17 05:52:08 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋