My heart was palpitating and beat a scary 20x a minute for some time, putting my life in acute danger.
*if possible i want to stress how close to death i was- maybe with an expression
2007-11-17 03:35:32 · 26 answers · asked by live for today 4 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
*** i was eleven and refused to eat so my heart was dying on me. i went in and out of consciousness... and really should have lost my life.
20x a minute is extremely SLOW. it should have been beating 80x a minute i believe. so with "palpitating," i am using it to describe the irregular heart beat... not racing.
2007-11-17 03:47:14 · update #1
"My heart stopped, and time froze. I became acutely aware of my surroundings, realizing this may be the last time I see them!"
...or something like that.
2007-11-17 03:40:17 · answer #1 · answered by lonorising 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My heart was palpitating an 20 times per minutes for putting my life in acute danger
2007-11-17 11:39:17 · answer #2 · answered by nicolechanelle 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
This: My heart was palpitating a scary 20 times a minute for some time, puttinng my life in acute danger.
Or this: With my heart palpitationg a dangerouse (scary) 20 times a minute, my life was in acute dange.
I like the first one better
2007-11-17 11:39:10 · answer #3 · answered by The Naturalist 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋
I was having heart palpitations and knew I was in serious danger. I knew Death was knocking on my door. My heart was beating faster than the wings of a hummingbird. (Or something like that.) (20 times a minutes is actually slower than a normal hearbeat should be under regular conditions, I wouldn't use that phrase.)
2007-11-17 11:44:26 · answer #4 · answered by FSM Raguru AM™ 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Putting my life in actue danger, my palpitating heart beat a scary 20X a minute!
2007-11-17 11:38:54 · answer #5 · answered by bittersweetmeh 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My life was in immediate danger; my heart was palpitating right out of my chest, beating at 20 times a minute, I am lucky I am alive.
2007-11-17 11:45:46 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My life was in acute danger, with my heart palpitating at a racing speed of twenty times a minute. This was a very frightening moment for me. Hope this is helpful. God bless****
2007-11-17 11:39:44 · answer #7 · answered by ? 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My heart was palpitating and at only 20 times a minute, I thought that I was most surely, taking my last breaths here on earth.
2007-11-17 11:53:13 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
My heart was beating at an astounding rate.120 beats a minute for so long was now putting my life in extreme danger!!
PS is 20x a minute not very slow. either that or im dying
2007-11-17 11:42:49 · answer #9 · answered by kay 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Course only you really can write this, for when it is this personal, only you know how it truly feels. However, here is my way of writing it, Normally i would really have to try many ways before deciding how something can be put for its emotional side to be shown. sounds like you went through something very challenging, for that I am truly sorry. How about this --
My heart pounded into a beating rage without mercy, until it put my life in danger, risking to fall into the darkness of death.
2007-11-17 11:44:15 · answer #10 · answered by Cathykaiser 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
My heart was beating faster than any race horse that I've ever seen,and yet my LIFE flash before my eyes, Then I know how much I wanted to live, If I made it through this moment of danger
I will make better choices for my future.
2007-11-17 11:43:07 · answer #11 · answered by laylay 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋