Is This Good???

Question

When I was a small girl my ambition was always to be a dog walker or own a monkey farm remote in the jungle. Now I know writing is my passion. Writing opens new doors that never shut; your whole life that prior knowledge will follow you like a shadow. It is a gratifying to understand the confluence of your dreams, aspirations, and really know what you want to do with your long life ahead of you. There have been good times and bad every time a memory is made or you experience something, a change this change can benefit or take away. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Change is a fact of life it will always happen. It may hurt us mentally, physically, and figuratively. We cannot run, and we cannot hide. Life leaves us with questions that the doors opened from our writing can answer. A passion is a great desire or love for something, that is what I feel when I write. My mouth may be quiet, but when I write the feelings poor out on the page.
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Writing is a refuge when I feel distraught writing helps my mind to empty like rotten food poured out of our hearts. The wound mends itself, all of the hurt and pain is on the page and there is nothing to remember. Writing can comfort the mind and never leaves you by yourself. A heavy heart is lifted and there is an instant modification.
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This is about me as a writer

Answer 1

I totally understand, my passion is Christianity as I am a Christian, serving Jesus is a joy undescribable and is totally supernatural, Jesus is the reason I breath, my heart doesn't beat again with him, his life was given for me and it is a debt I can never repay so the least I can do is serve him will all my being, I read the bible, I pray I teach I preach I do anything I can to glorify my Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ. Serving Christ is my refuge, I feel if I didn't do it I would die, what peace,what joy, and I pray what your passion is does the same for you, God Bless!!

Answer 2

What is it that you want? I have always been a poor writer and even worse at spelling. I am so think full for spell checkers. Without them may writing would look like a monkey got a hold of the keyboard and started pounding on it.

I do see a lot of irrational beliefs in what you wrote. Like "Change is a fact of life it will always happen. It may hurt us mentally, physically, and figuratively." It just isn't true that IT may hurt us mentally, physically and figuratively. How is that so? Can you prove it?

You might want to study REBT and get you understanding of reality straighten out. And ther is only one reality and it is the same for everyone.

Good luck

Answer 3

no its not wrong