I have written a short piece concerning Bereavement, Love and Friendship and an Aids death?

Question

I would love it if you read this piece and gave me comments about it
Here is the link to the short piece of writing:
http://meanderingtrevor.blogspot.com/2007/08/this-is-love-kiddo.html

Answer 1

i read it
i read all of it
it made me sad,
it made me smile
it made me think

he unbroke your heart
and he broke it again too

how very very dare he

i wish i knew what to say now,
but i dont,
but i want to say thank you
for sharing

hang on in there
good things do happen to good people