When i am alone
I think of you
Is this Love?
I'm going through?
When we'r together
we shout and yell
Is this love
always and forever?
When you hurt me
I shred a tear
Is this love
Or just a fear?
When we argue
I take the blame
Is this love?
Or just a game?
When you leave
I run back
Is this love
or off the track?
But when we kiss
I feel emotion
Is this love
Or just a notion?
2007-11-15 10:52:04 · 8 answers · asked by ItsMe. 1 in Family & Relationships ➔ Marriage & Divorce
Trying for a job at Hallmark? Did not like it.
2007-11-15 10:54:39 · answer #1 · answered by acedelux 6 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Well, the poem sucks, but I appreciate the effort. No, it is not love. It is merely an infatuation. Give it a year, if you still feel the same, write me another poem. I'll let you know.
Is this love, no way dude
Not to be mean, not to be rude
Love is a far cry from what you feel
You wont need to ASK if love is real
You'll just know, in the pit of your heart
And losing that person will tear you apart
2007-11-15 18:59:52 · answer #2 · answered by chuckachoo 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
When reading this I sort of thought
that most of this poem is about two people who faught
You forgot to add the good things in marriage
like the parents looking at their baby in the baby carriage.
Like holding hands and laughing with each other
or sharing an intimate time with one another.
Your poem was good however I will say.
Your marriage depends on how you treat one another each and every day
2007-11-15 19:00:41 · answer #3 · answered by luvlisteningtomusic 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I'm speechless, that was great, I don't know about those other people but this poem has meaning, the meaning of what is love.All I have to say is spell check.
2007-11-15 19:11:10 · answer #4 · answered by Mango b. 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Well it sounds like the narrator of the poem is in love but the person she is in love with doesn't love her back.
2007-11-15 18:56:57 · answer #5 · answered by moon&stars 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
My opinion is that is a very nice poem and you need to learn how use the spell check.
Good luck.
2007-11-15 18:55:09 · answer #6 · answered by box of rain 7 · 0⤊ 1⤋
Very nice.
Thanks
2007-11-15 18:56:13 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
this is a kool poem. ITS LOVE!
2007-11-15 18:55:34 · answer #8 · answered by glowe 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋