Is this a good thesis statement?

Question

I'm writing an editorial for my government class on the Federalist position on the ratification of the Constitution. Is this a good thesis statement? If not, how can I improve it?

The Federalist party supported the ratification of the Constitution.

Answer 1

I had to do the exact same thing except it was about signing the declaration of inderpendence- between the patriots and loyalists. we had to write a thesis statement too and that is pretty much the same structure as mine. hope this helps good luck

Answer 2

That sounds like half of a good thesis statement. Expand on it:

"The Federalist party supported the ratification of the Constitution by (or through or with) __________."

Be a little more specific about how they did it, and you'll have an easier time trying to prove your point. What you have is a good start, but it is a little too general and a bit of a statement of the obvious. Good luck!

Answer 3

The Federalist party supported the ratification of the Constitution by -------------....

i would give a little hint or clue to whate might be in the rest of you peice of writing.

Answer 4

yes not too much detail in it but still talks about what u are going to say in your paragraph