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THe first improvement that would make the education system is the Entrance exam in a year in Korea. It's so important so student's future can count on this Entrance Exam. Students take it seriously because they want to go to good college. Going good college means that students are succeed in the education. This system made students sick so someone who doesn't take the Entrance Exam well, he/she is so depressed, and even someone killed himself or herself because of failure of exam. To improve this system is that schools should value the student's grade records. It will be unfair if those students have a good grade records, but they don't get a good result on the Entrance Exam, then their good records will be underestimated.

2007-11-15 07:53:05 · 4 answers · asked by ½ÃÂù ± 2 in Education & Reference Teaching

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I changed the wording alittle to add some emphasis and help the flow work better. I hope you don't mind :D

The first improvement that could be made to the Korean education system woud be to alter the importance of the Entrance exam. The student's entire educational future is based off of this exam. Students take the exam so seriously because to get into a good university is the only way to succeed in their lifestyle. The stress is so great it leads to sickness, and even depression with the potential of suicide if not taken well. To improve this, the state should also put value on each student's grading records. It is unfair to students who maintain good grading records for may years to be completely disreguarded because of doing poorly on one exam.

2007-11-15 08:09:08 · answer #1 · answered by DreamGirl 3 · 0 0

How about this;-

The first improvement to make in the Korean education system should be to the Entrance Examination. It is important because a student's future can depend on this exam and students take it seriously because they want to go to a good college. Attending a good college shows that students are succeeding in their education.
However, this system has made some students, who have failed the Entrance Exam, so sick that some have become depressed or even attempted suicide.
In order to improve this system, schools should attach greater value to the student's grade records, as it is unfair that students with good grade records are judged harshly if they do not do well in the Entrance Exam.

2007-11-15 16:04:59 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 0 0

The first thing that needs to be improved in the education system is the Entrance Exam in Korea. It's very important to a student's future that they can count on this Entrance Exam. Students take it seriously because they want to go to a good college. Going to a good college means that students will succeed in their education. This system makes students sick because if someone doesn't take the Entrance Exam well, he or she can come become very depressed. Some people even kill themselves because of failing the exam. To improve this system, schools should value the student's grade records. It is currently unfair to students that have good grade records, but don't get good grades on the Entrance Exam, because their good records are ignored.

2007-11-15 16:03:09 · answer #3 · answered by whaddyaknow? 4 · 0 0

The first improvement that would make the education system is the Entrance exam (each) year in Korea. It's so important so student's future can count on this Entrance Exam.

Students take it seriously because they want to go to (a) good college. Going (to a) good college means that students are succeed (successful) in education.

This system made students sick - someone who doesn't (do well in) the Entrance Exam, he/she (they can become) so depressed, and even someone killed himself or herself (themselves) because of failure of (this) exam.

To improve this system, schools should value the student's grade records. It will be unfair if those students have a good grade records, but (if) they don't get a good result on the Entrance Exam, then their good records will be underestimated.

2007-11-15 16:00:18 · answer #4 · answered by Mark M 2 · 0 0

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