One day hope said to trust:
Will you ever trust me?
Trust unwillingly said:
You are just mere hope.
How could i ever trust you?
So hope went back home,
Feeling hopeless.
But on another occasion,
Trust was feeling vulnerable;
So he asked hope:
Is there anymore hope left?
Hope simply answered:
It has always been there
until you started to mistrust me!
Hope and trust then,
Were torn apart,
Without either hope
or trust.
;-)
2007-11-15 00:39:20 · 18 answers · asked by Dark Dickinsonian 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Wow...Stooge! That's really touching...I was afraid of you all these while...You actually do have a soft heart! ;-)
2007-11-15 04:52:49 · update #1
of course i know what u mean, DFA...
2007-11-17 16:23:38 · update #2
Is it possible to fall in love with an avatar
Even though the miles separating us
Place you way to far
On the lonely globe
How it spins yet we are no closer....
Cruel fate of avatar infatuation ...
It haunts us, mocks us
do you trust them or are you cautious
Or maybe you like to lay out your soul
Even if it's just for a little attention?
Loves fade as pictures change
Yet we still remember the distance between us.
That remains.
2007-11-15 04:46:20 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 11⤊ 0⤋
Very, very good Moonbelle...
Hope = Trust x Love^2
my law of universal spirituality
ANNABELLA, ah, mon petit chou, we meet yet again, I hope you and the City of Light are well today...
MOONBELLE: my dear, if Stooge is a poet I have a bridge in Brooklyn I want to sell you, this is just his mating song, and you are right, his heart is soft, but alas, everything else about him is soft also, if you know what I mean...
2007-11-15 01:14:21 · answer #2 · answered by Anonymous · 7⤊ 0⤋
Very good. You convey your feelings nicely here and you have natural talent for that and writing poems from the heart and soul. I would love to meet and fall in love with a woman like you one day.
EDIT:
Ack, no wonder Stooge got his PHD, he is edumacated past my level of 6th grade. He remembers all those years I spent in the 5th grade too, by golly. LOL
2007-11-15 02:56:57 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 6⤊ 0⤋
Until one day another friend appeared on the scene, He said don't just trust for trust sake, or hope for hope sake. But rather put your hope and trust in me J C. Trust in me and in the end I'll see your all right, that is your hope, in the end all will be right.
2007-11-15 00:59:44 · answer #4 · answered by Hi T 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
Beautiful, Moonbelle. I am glad you can put everything in words.
xxx
EDIT: hello, gallant knight. The City of Light is as usual: on strike.
EDIT2: Stooge, I am impressed!
2007-11-15 00:57:55 · answer #5 · answered by Lady Annabella-VInylist 7 · 6⤊ 0⤋
You should write one like that for the Poetry Contest on Liefde-Chance.com
2007-11-15 02:24:24 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
I have no words except that of laughter for Stooge and his "gentle heart..."
Lmao.
2007-11-15 07:58:30 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 4⤊ 0⤋
Very good
2007-11-15 00:48:31 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 3⤊ 1⤋
Great poem Moonbell; you should write more often.,.,
2007-11-15 04:07:57 · answer #9 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋
This is really funny! What a great idea!
2007-11-15 01:03:36 · answer #10 · answered by TD Euwaite? 6 · 7⤊ 0⤋