How about this one.....
My mind sharpens,
arcs towards distant evolution beyond time,
future from here, and in this exact moment simultaneous.
Release that empties, expands,
quiet, highest silence,
river of stillness,
pure self enveloped in pure non space,
no place, no names,
dissolve into glorious air.
Enter upon heaven, captures the being that I am,
embraces deepest reservoir, total imersion
into its inverted lake, head first into a dream,
fluid, infinite openness,
a wave upon wave of ever expanding bliss.
Silent realm of above ,
full, abundant water of eternal life,
I drink.
2007-11-12 22:17:36 · 6 answers · asked by Lyra 5 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Deep pool of knowing
experiencing itself
in myriad ways.
Reflections are kept alive
mirrored in beholding minds.
Betsy
2007-11-13 04:24:57 · answer #1 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Cleared up Desperation ...
One's thoughts - actions - goals
nothingness filled up with sense
constructed stand points.
Clever words - wisdom of self
static dissolving in space.
Habits - hopes - beliefs
relating to emptiness
views trapped in vain.
Observer lost in darkness
no stepping stone left ahead.
Relationships end
reflected feelings faded
longings all cut down.
Body's appearance shrinking
properties give no support.
What was driving me
direction giving ideas
with selfless motives
reality took over
illusions dried out in time.
Left alone - ignored
without sharing of my pain
thrown back to oneself.
Outside distraction calms down
distorted view turns inward.
What keeps me alive?
Memory of existence?
Experience patterns?
Why do I still ask myself?
Tired of endless answers.
Looking at the moon
stars blinking straight down to me
message without words.
There is nothing left to say:
BEING fills the space - - and me.
BeiYin
2007-11-13 10:27:54 · answer #2 · answered by BeiYin *answers questions* 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
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2016-12-16 07:16:31 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I feel the exact opposite... This appears darkly lit - Leave it alone.
I love it.
2007-11-13 03:12:28 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
This appears pretty dark lighten up
2007-11-12 23:29:49 · answer #5 · answered by deneansmith@att.net 4 · 1⤊ 1⤋
Depends on what mood i'm in....this poem is pretty good though.
2007-11-13 09:02:33 · answer #6 · answered by aj 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋