can someone help me to correct this?

Question

(grammar,transitions suggestion anything)

According to Engle Superman represents a religious symbol. Engle believes THAT superman is a visitor from “heaven.” His appearance is like an angel with his cape which echoes its curve like angel’s wings. His name has a virtuous meaning “all that is God” and “I have found a son.” Engle believes that superman is the American guardian who can serves as a secure “nonsectarian” focus for religious response, mainly among young. In relationship, however, American society generally does not recognize sacred icons because its diverse religious beliefs would cause different and opposing religions views.

Answer 1

According to Engle, Superman represents a religious symbol. Engle believes that Superman is a visitor from heaven. His appearance is like an angel's, with his cape which is reminiscent in its curve like an angel's wings. His name has a virtuous meaning: "All that is God" and "I have found a son." Engle believes that Superman is the American guardian who can serve as a secure, nonsectarian focus for religious response, mainly among the young. In this regard, however; American society does not recognize sacred icons because of its diverse religious beliefs which cause different and opposing religious views.

Answer 2

According to Engle, Superman represents a religious symbol. Engle believes That superman is a visitor from heaven. His appearance is like an angel with his cape, which echoes its curve like angel’s wings. His name has a virtuous meaning of “all that is God” and “I have found a son.” Engle believes that superman is the American guardian who can serves as a secure nonsectarian focus for religious response, mainly among young. In relationship, however, American society generally does not recognize sacred icons because its diverse religious beliefs would cause different and opposing religions views.

Only corrections above are to limit use of quotes, and an addition of commas. Otherwise, well done.

Answer 3

It's really hard to emulate someone else's tone, but Superman should be in caps, as well as Heaven too.

Also:

In relationship, however, American society generally does not recognize sacred icons. The diverse religious beliefs found in America would cause different and opposing religious (not "religions") views.