pls critique this seriously and honestly FRIEDNDZZZ?

Question

expressing the feelings that i have for you,
could not be expressed by simple words,
it has taken me day and night,
to simply think about these a few words,
i have come across many creations of god,
but have never seen one like you,
if i can find words to describe how you look,
there would be simply too many,
to express you as you are,
so let me tell yoy how i truly feel,
as i come across you beautiful face,
my mouth cant form words,
to describe how i feel,
this world seems a lot better,
everytime i look at you,
i wish i can wake up every morning,
by looking in your eyes,
so that i can feel better about life,
even when life does not want to cooperate..

i tried
it took me 5 minn

Answer 1

passionate admiration indeed but speaker should look beyond mere appearance. all that glitters isn't gold hahaha!

Answer 2

give it to the girl u like. or love. read it to her. shell like it especially if its in ur handwriting.