Well, I'm ten years old, and I'm trying to find my talent.
She sits in her bed, tears in her eyes,
She remembers the day,
She wants to die,
Is this where she shall lay?
Elmos smile sparked her deppresion,
After he crumbled her heart,
She only thought it was an obsession,
Her once sweet smile, gone, it's now tart.........
He says he won't hurt her but she knows he lies,
Gun in his hand, she knows its her last day,
She wants to die...
Is this where she lays....?
She creeps into bed,
Hands on the trigger,
A smile slithers u-pon her face,
Soon all she has to do... is pull the trigger...
(whisper)
She hears footsteps.....
She hears footseps , shes screaming down to the core,
She knows its her last day,
The mystery person opens the door......
Her body collapses,
Her vision starts to slurr,
The pain will end now, no memory lapses,
Death will now occur.
Hellbound.
(whisper) Killme if you wish, but I'm already dead. (gunshot
2007-11-12 14:07:14 · 10 answers · asked by Anonymous in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
I have had depression problems in the past..
2007-11-12 14:18:36 · update #1
Uh........
2007-11-12 14:34:58 · update #2
Wow! That's incredible, but are you suicidle?
2007-11-12 14:16:01 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Keep writing!Your words translate into the hearts hidden language!!!! Painful and beautiful! Excellent!
2007-11-12 14:25:40 · answer #2 · answered by sandra b 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
darling....
i hate to burst your bubble....
but i have reason to doubt that your 10.
if i am wrong and you are 10. i suggest a career in writing.
if you just produce this artwork and excuse it for a 10 year olds, i think you should rethink where your going with this.
but i reali would like to think that you are 10. good luck
2007-11-12 14:57:46 · answer #3 · answered by jason D.C 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
What is wrong? Boyfiend, girlfriend, money, don't like your looks,? teeth? weight? private part envy?
Joining the Army or somethings the great goal somebody like you could aim at.
2007-11-12 14:23:17 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
perfect given your age. a bit scary though. talent is present.nice short poem
2007-11-12 14:28:21 · answer #5 · answered by ari-pup 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
It's pretty good, but you're ten years old!! You shouldn't be writing about stuff like that.
2007-11-12 14:11:54 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
You is one scary 10 year old!
2007-11-12 14:14:35 · answer #7 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
you good but really u should be writing about candy n pokemon n naruto n stuff like that not death
2007-11-12 14:17:10 · answer #8 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 1⤋
wow dats pretty good.. u know its good to write poems when ur depressed.....it kinda clears things up sumtimes...
2007-11-12 14:22:49 · answer #9 · answered by illustrator #12 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
nice. see you in hell
2007-11-13 00:49:19 · answer #10 · answered by chickenapplefudgenuggetsandcream 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋