I saw this sign, for myspace that says, "Warning - Latinos Make Better Lovers. I dont know if you've seen it. Well i decided to remake it but better.
Old Version : http://i19.tinypic.com/6xad4pi.jpg
My New Version : Mine : http://i6.tinypic.com/8ado86u.jpg
Please check it out and tell me if its good enough or i need to work on it more. thanks!
2007-11-12 07:15:44 · 10 answers · asked by Me 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Visual Arts ➔ Drawing & Illustration
Ok i tried to fix some of the problems
- I separated the words a little to make it more legible
- i also moved the words over a bit so it wont overlap the border
Check it out pleas
http://i3.tinypic.com/82o0ml4.jpg
2007-11-12 07:30:19 · update #1
Well it's certainly creative...
2007-11-12 07:18:49 · answer #1 · answered by Me 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Note that, even some of the ones that LIKE your version, state that it is hard to read.
I think that taking it in a direction the resembles some grafitti forms is a good idea. May I suggest that you choose letter designs that are simpler, and easier to read. I've seen plenty of examples of messages, sprayed on walls that were clear and striking. You want people to "get it." Most won't bother to spend the time, just trying to make out the text, and, simply pass it by without reading it.
Work in it, Carnal!
2007-11-12 07:45:04 · answer #2 · answered by Vince M 7 · 3⤊ 0⤋
right this is the element approximately symptoms and symptoms---they'd desire to be legible. human beings would desire to be waiting to comprehend the threat without delay. no longer stand there thinking what the 1st actual notice is, or squinting their eyes attempting to make out something of it. curiously you somewhat, truly like the graffiti font, plenty so as which you do no longer care that it only won't artwork consisting of your concept (and it truly is no longer working, face it). So only exchange your concept and do some thing else extremely, some thing that makes the graffiti font artwork. How approximately only "Latino Lover" interior the graffiti font (or one you're making your self)? you will use black and pink, and drop the full element into any horizontal shape you like. possibly some variety of demented broken-coronary heart shape, that would desire to function a warning of the "threat" of turning into romantically in touch with, um...you?
2016-10-02 05:13:06 · answer #3 · answered by ? 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
If the old version wasn't there, it would have taken me a while to figure out the text. Make the font a little easier to read?
2007-11-12 07:25:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
Your way looks a lot better. But, it might be a little harder to read the words for some people.
2007-11-12 07:19:05 · answer #5 · answered by Jelly 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋
that's cool. it'd be hard to read, though. i don't like how the last word overlaps the mexican border. i mean, border.
2007-11-12 07:22:14 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
well you need to work on it more because you can't even read your supposedly improved version.
Take a look at it..you can't make out any words...Its just a friggin jumble of NONSENCE.. you didn't notice this????
2007-11-12 07:21:14 · answer #7 · answered by zanthus 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
If you hadn't tell me what it said, I would never have known. I can't read a word of yours!
2007-11-12 07:21:06 · answer #8 · answered by †®€Åç∫€ 5 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Wow! I think it looks great as is.
2007-11-12 07:22:03 · answer #9 · answered by ☮Moonbeam☮ 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋
No , it looks OK.
2007-11-12 07:19:12 · answer #10 · answered by WC 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋