How would you rate this new short story ?

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How would you rate this new short story ?

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2007-11-12 06:11:23 · 2 answers · asked by Nishant A 1 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Other - Arts & Humanities

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Woderful, I would go in 'ORIGIN' and 'LINKS', I would like to study the'STORY', CONGRATULTIONS.

2007-11-14 23:33:52 · answer #1 · answered by indrajeet d 5 · 0⤊ 0⤋

It is good. Get it proof read by a litterture professor or English one. It could be more strong, with the switching of some sentences here and there. Three stars at the raw stage, could really be terffic with the right kind of advice.

Good Try, I might just now publish a story of my own, Thank you for giving me courage to do so.

2007-11-16 05:06:11 · answer #2 · answered by mx. know it all 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋