I have a dream:
For all people happy in the world,
We must say ‘Stop’ to war.
No more wars in this world!
No more tears on children’s cheeks.
I don’t want to see pain
And sadness in their eyes any more.
Without peace the birds will not sing,
There will be pain in our hearts.
I want peace in the world.
Preslav Plamenov, 9 years
Peace/Salaam/Shalom
2007-11-10 14:28:16 · 7 answers · asked by Mimi 6 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
ya_who_00
if the child had to focus on the rhyme, the poem would lose its beautiful meanings.
Peace
2007-11-10 14:42:57 · update #1
When a child writes it writes from its Heart as its ego does not cloud its judgement..!
Mimi I also liked the one about Peace..
PEACE
I wish peace,
Love and peace.
Peace, peace, peace,
Peace in the world.
I dream only
For health and love.
Peace, peace, peace,
Peace in the world.
Tzvetomil Mladenov, 9 years
Love Always
2007-11-11 09:41:49 · answer #1 · answered by Apolo 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
The poem is fantastic let the other say what they want I find it really nice. ajdkfjke... try in this age to do something better big mouth. It's people like you who make the world a war ground because we always think that we are better then other. Show how good you are. I appreciate kids like this may Allah guide her more (Ameen).
2007-11-11 21:35:44 · answer #2 · answered by ahlan 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
MashAllah! What a beautiful and meaningful poem!
Such sweet and true words from a child can open a person's eyes to the cruelties and hardships of war.
May Allah bless Preslav.
2007-11-11 08:33:25 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 1⤋
There is definitely something nicer than the poem ... it's the child himself !! Good thoughts for someone at that age.
However, I would at best give a 4 rating to the poem. I know many kids who write much better than that. Where's the rhyme in the poem?
Considering that the interest in Poetry is there, perhaps a bit of grooming, reading poetry and practice can gift the world another great poet !!
2007-11-10 14:38:55 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 4⤋
a very nice poem..let the dream of this child be fulfilled!
... but we could not say exactly when to stop the "war"...of ideas, words..powers..etc! ...The reason why there are non-stop-conflicts in this world we live in.
God bless this child!!
2007-11-10 14:47:24 · answer #5 · answered by jmjm 3 · 2⤊ 1⤋
Awwww that is so sweet, so touching. May Allah bless this child.
2007-11-10 14:31:28 · answer #6 · answered by ¸.•*´`*•.¸ ℓανєη∂єr ¸.•*´`*•.¸ 6 · 4⤊ 1⤋
that sucks I wouldve done better at that age
2007-11-10 14:32:08 · answer #7 · answered by Johnnyonthespot 3 · 0⤊ 7⤋