With anger and fear
Along comes tears
Grinding Gears
Loud noises you hear
Chipped metal rust
Nothing but dust
Just pure gust
From outside water lust
The machines Reiteration
Moving Artifacts Transition
That only brings Eradication
Fear of an Insurrection
With the knowledge they could obliterate
Everything they locate
Everyone is disconsolate
The world is dilapidated
2007-11-09 13:08:22 · 6 answers · asked by Frostt 2 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
ummm... it was okay... you have a great vocabulary though!!!!!!!!!! Points for the vocab.... go talk to my english teacher she would love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
2007-11-09 13:12:21 · answer #1 · answered by dumbledoresarmy35 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Sounds like The Age of Machines...A Mechanicalistic Age...something like that. It's definitely different, and interesting.
2007-11-09 22:14:23 · answer #2 · answered by Norak D 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Nice!!I like it!!it sounds like the surroundings is too noisy..you did expressed what is really happening to our place..everything is ruined.take care always..I hope you can compose another one...goodluck!
2007-11-09 21:30:50 · answer #3 · answered by xrae12 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
WOW,your better than me! Your great
2007-11-09 21:14:13 · answer #4 · answered by Annie♥ 3 · 0⤊ 0⤋
to much rhym.
But thats just me... great vocab tho
2007-11-09 21:43:38 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
its good...
2007-11-09 21:17:20 · answer #6 · answered by thingsthatmakeugohmmm 4 · 0⤊ 0⤋