How do you like my poem it is called "HER"?

Question

Her


From time to time, I think of her.

When she's on my mind, I can't stop missin her.

And when I go to sleep, I dream of her.

And in my dreams, I'm kissin her.

So when I wake up, I'll look 4 her.

Once I find her, I'll never let go of her.

You can have my body, but my soul is hers.

And hers is mine, so I'd even die 4 her.

I find her stunning, It's more than style with her.

Truth be told, if I was her.

I'd want someone, who would stand up for her.

Cause I find beauty, in the ugliest parts of her.

And I want to hang out, so I can say I am wit her.

I'll even cuddle, b4 sex wit her.

She has the type of beauty, that you know God took his time wit her,

So much so, that when he looks at her,

He brags to other Gods like, " Damn, I did good wit her."

And all I wanna know is, when will I meet her.

So if you fit the description, gimme a call so I can find out if... you... are...her!

Answer 1

It will not get any prize and it highly unlikely that it will lure her to you ~~

Answer 2

Although I'm not the girl
of which you speak about,
Before I puke up chunks & hurl,
I thought I'd give you a shout.

This poem has nothing to it,
it lacks all things that are good.
Instead of writing, just go do it!
(go have sex and cure that wood.)

My review is ****, but less-so than yours
(As it really is quite the crap),
Time to get back to my tedious chores;
crushing dreams to a really bad rap.

Answer 3

kugray is right sorry and plus it sounds too much like a song I've heard before.

Answer 4

It's ok but there's a redundancy of "her's"..it's irritating.

Answer 5

its cool