English grammer?

Question

Concise Writting
Rewrite the following 97-word paragraph, keeping all its ideas but reducing the number of words. Try to use no more than 40 words.


We would like to meet face to face with our old rivals, but they still regard us in a way that shows a lack of confidence. We understand their frame of mind. They have a fierce sense of their own worth and dignity. They are short of temper. But when others have suffered, they have not been without concern, interest, or feeling. The feeling of ill will that they have had toward us has to a large extent diminished. We might become friends. A year ago, such a possibility would have have seemed too extraordinary to be believed.


Now write your version on the lines below. The first sentence has been rewritten to help you get started.

We would like to confront our old rivals, but they still regard us suspiciously.

this is not for a project if it was i wouldnt have to ask a question

Answer 1

We would like to confront our old rivals, but they still regard us suspiciously. We understand their fierce, hair-trigger dignity. However, they have shown concern about others' suffering. Their ill-will is gone. This year friendship is possible.

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Cheers,
Bruce

Answer 2

Are you asking people to do this work for you? I'd be glad to HELP you do it, but I won't do it for you. If it isn't for a project it isn't going to be marked, so you can learn how to do this type of assignment by going through it yourself and you don't have to worry about getting marked down on it.

Answer 3

if this is for a project...then its cheating.