staring out......
staring out my window i look at the night skies,
i start to remember what hapened this summer,cant help but to cry.
when i look out my window i know i could have been better,now wanting to jumpout,
but in the end id hit the ground and die.
has i gaze out my window i relize my faults..my heart starts to blaze,i think,"why do i hate myself?",
but why?...
now my soul is being put away slowly on a shelf...
what u think is it good?
2007-11-07 17:10:07 · 17 answers · asked by samantha 3 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
Yes, it is very good, but very sad.....did you have an issue with romance over the summer, and it made you sad?
2007-11-07 17:24:23 · answer #1 · answered by pampam1970 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Everyone on here is saying they like your poem but I think it is a cry for help. Its depressing and it talks about suicide and it shows that you're not happy with yourself. I wish you would have more self esteem in yourself and realize that you are special in your own way and you deserve to live life to the fullest. You have a lot of negativity in your life right now and you need to remove yourself from that so that you can be more productive. Never let anything steal your joy.....
2007-11-08 10:37:28 · answer #2 · answered by concernone 3 · 3⤊ 0⤋
I like it Sammi, but not the part about jumping out of a window and dieing.
Try being more positive hon.
2007-11-08 01:27:05 · answer #3 · answered by BILL 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
I like the part about your heart starting to blaze!
2007-11-08 01:16:45 · answer #4 · answered by Cheeky 6 · 1⤊ 0⤋
it's good... I like it.
hope you don't still feel like that.
life is about change and bettering yourself so embrace it.
Don't live with regrets.
Ask God to fogive you about past things done wrong... and put them on the ocean floor as God does.
Jesus Loves you girl!!
2007-11-08 01:14:45 · answer #5 · answered by lil_troublemaker1 2 · 0⤊ 1⤋
i like it ecspecially like the part about soul put away on shelf
2007-11-08 01:12:02 · answer #6 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
The answer is: anyone who could write such beautiful poetry should never hate herself.
2007-11-08 09:31:44 · answer #7 · answered by Steve C 7 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Recite it at a coffee house.
2007-11-08 16:19:19 · answer #8 · answered by solelone 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
hi, i think it is good but get the impression your your very unhappy. I'm not a doctor but a good listener so if you need someone to talk to please email me
best regards Paula
2007-11-08 04:36:55 · answer #9 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
yea it is good it is come out from your heart so is perfect
2007-11-08 08:39:18 · answer #10 · answered by CP 6 · 3⤊ 0⤋