Make me a poem please?

Question

I am making kind of a collage/portrait thingy for a friend right now with a lot of random pictures in there, and for part of the picture, I'd like to have a little poem showing up in places. I'd like it to have something about a phoenix, the moon, love, lotus, October, and the sun. I'm terrible at writing poems, so the person who can write me the best poem with the things I just metioned will get 5 stars from me! You might even get the 5 stars if it is kind of like a song, but I'm not necessarilly promising that LOL!

Um, I tried an acrostic poem, but you know? I just never feel satisfied when I finish one of those, so it just didn't work out. Sorry!

Answer 1

you are like the sun
always shining your beautiful smile
you are as bright as the moon
on a hollow October night

You walked into my life
showed me the true meaning of friends
enclosing the tie of my lonely abyss
through the thick and the thin
stronger than a phoenix

**** (friends you can keep)

Maybe you can make a poem using your friends name. By using each letter to make a line.

hope this helps.

Edit:

Friends
Remember
Ignorances that no one does
Everything speaks of my friend
Never
Driving out of my life
Savoring you, because you are my precious friend

Answer 2

i'm giving it a shot...but i'm warning you this is really just another short crap...without any title whatsoever =P


a phoenix looms above the sun
drawn to love like another rerun
patiently awaits his lotus to bloom
on a starless night of doom
of an October without a moon

Answer 3

have you tried some of the poem sites? or even look up some of the classic poems by poe

Answer 4

hahaha! ok, seriously, why don't YOU write the poem YOURSELF cause it's YOUR friend! Sounds good!!!

Answer 5

pooffffffffff....your now a poem...btw keep the points