SONG in process, need honest opinions?

Question

its called Follow ME Though

When the day gets tough
hold your hands up high
be strong, dont let anything get by

look around the room
at who really knows you
tell me,
am i staring straight at you??

follow me thoguh,
my misareis to
the place im happy at
and i call home.
where you can spread your wings
touch the sky with me
and be anything you want to be
follow me thoguh


im still working on it though just got the first verse and choas tell my your thoughts

its Follow Me Through, sorry about that

Answer 1

I like it, and that's saying something. I'm usually the biggest critic of everyone who wants opinions on their lyrics/poetry/short stories. Is it Follow Me Though or Follow Me Through? There's a big difference. Keep working at it. Then let me know when it's about to become famous, ok?

Answer 2

I feel as though I heard this before even though i probably haven't. That's not generally a good thing but i do get the feeling that this comes from the heart. Keep working on it. i really love that last verse though:
follow me thoguh,
my misareis to
the place im happy at
and i call home.
where you can spread your wings
touch the sky with me
and be anything you want to be
follow me thoguh
And if you're like fo-looooooooow me thru over like three times at the end of the song that would be just beautiful.

Answer 3

lyrics are horrible, but you might have a beautiful voice who knows. but lyrics are horrible.

Answer 4

I like it-- nice and positive.