I wrote this out of boredom. may be confusing.
You may doubt truth to be a liar,
And doubt the wind to be seen,
You may doubt that the sun has risen,
And doubt that the world is cruel and mean.
But when it comes to doubting,
You must know fiction from fact,
For if you understand and do not get confused,
You may keep your brain intact.
If you are headstrong,
And know right from wrong,
Then doubting when you need to,
Should keep you going along.
Now i know this makes no sense,
For it is quite confusing,
But while you sit there looking lost,
I find it quite amusing.☺☻☺☻
2007-11-07 12:35:28 · 9 answers · asked by Minty 2 in Entertainment & Music ➔ Polls & Surveys
I like it. That was cool.
2007-11-07 12:39:18 · answer #1 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 0⤋
I'm not lost, I'm amazed! Your "poem" is not at all confusing but is severely lacking in comprehension of the English language and it's nuances in order to make it tongue in cheek. That is what it should be but that is exactly what it's not!
2007-11-07 20:46:57 · answer #2 · answered by Chris B 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Congratulations Kayde. This is a good poem. I really liked it.
2007-11-07 23:45:39 · answer #3 · answered by Alfie333 7 · 0⤊ 0⤋
Touched me deep down
2007-11-07 20:39:35 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
great poem for real.you are a wonderful poet Kayde !!!!
2007-11-07 22:49:14 · answer #5 · answered by Cami lives 6 · 0⤊ 0⤋
LOVED IT!! Especially the third part.
2007-11-07 20:41:40 · answer #6 · answered by turtle girl 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
lol its cute you get an A for the day
2007-11-07 20:39:54 · answer #7 · answered by ☠Rockin Punk☠ 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Oh, that's pretty good! You're a great poet.
2007-11-07 20:38:28 · answer #8 · answered by ♥HAL♥ 3 · 1⤊ 1⤋
sounds ok
2007-11-07 20:49:55 · answer #9 · answered by jalyn 2 · 0⤊ 0⤋