Is this a good poem? Trustful comments, please?

Question

Forget his name,
Forget his face,
Forget his kiss and warm embrace,
Forget the things he used to say,
Remember now he’s gone away.

Forget the things he used to do,
Forget the **** he put you through,
Forget the love you once shared,
Forget the fact that he once cared,
Forget the way he said your name,
Remember now things aren‘t the same.

Forget the talks you once had,
Forget the thought,
It makes you sad,
Forget that you said you would wai,
Remember now his love is hate.

Forget him when they play your song,
Forget you once cried all night long,
Forget he said he’d never leave.
Remember now,
He’s gone forever.

Answer 1

repeatation of the same word again and again in a poem needs quite careful rhyming, and i think this poem is full of all the good rhyming needed, which reminisces quite much filled in your heart,showing dim lights in those dark regions,,,in your verses.......and the end too gave the last effective punch,,,that has a lasting impression,,,,,trust me,,,its a nice one,,,,kudoz

Answer 2

I happen to know who wrote this poem, and while it's a nice poem, you were NOT the one to write it. At least if you're going to pretend to take credit for something, pick something that's not so popular.

Forget his name

Forget his face

Forget his kiss

His warm embrace

Forget the love that you once knew

Remember he has someone new

Forget him how he played your song

Remember you cried all night long

Forget how close that you once were

Remember he has chosen her

Forget how you memorized his walk

Forget the way he used to talk

Forget the things he used to say

Remember he has gone away

Forget his laugh

Forget his grin

Forget that dimple by his chin

Forget the way he held you tight

Remember he’s with her tonight

Forget the time

It went so fast

Forget the whispers and the love

It’s past

Remember how he told you he’d leave you never

Then remember he’s gone forever

Answer 3

I can relate to where you are coming from totally when I read your poem. So yes, I honestly find this a good poem. Poetry can sometimes be the only outlet to communicate what we are feeling. I love poetry and I love quotations. Many times the fewest words can convey the most profound thoughts and feelings. You are not alone~Lisa.

Answer 4

i luv it! ive never seen this type of poem, where a word begins almost evryline. the rhythm was a little iffy at some places but otherwise, its a great poem! u should try to make that last line rhyme, it sounded weird at the end.

Answer 5

Sounds really good. This reminds me of repetition and that it is. The rhyme scheme is alright. It might have sounded better if you had put them in a pattern;
blue
do
you

Answer 6

good! , but dont forget a man is just a man , but your feelings are the ones who matter

Answer 7

i love it can u send it to my email please [e-mail]. that is what i need cause i just broke up with my bf

Answer 8

It's ok