The Fallen Dark Prince.
Your in my arms,
we're on the ground,
your soul has fallen down.
I weep for you,
You shot yourself,
right through your handsom face.
I tryed to stop you,
I swear I did,
But nothing could change your mind.
You thought that you were all alone,
But now you see you weren't.
It didn't have to end this way,
I wish I had done more.
I look at you,
your face is stained,
with the color I now hate.
I pray to God,
"Is this just a dream?"
But now I know its not.
So do not follow this man's path,
he wasn't always soo lost.
But this Prince of mine,
the one Dark Prince,
had completely lost all hope.
....i had to vent through this poem today.. i'm not really sure what to think.
2007-11-06 12:23:51 · 6 answers · asked by dragonflyy 4 in Arts & Humanities ➔ Poetry
Since I'm the Dark Prince I thought I would answer. I love a woman very much but her sister is a screeching idiot. She hates me and now the feeling is mutual. She is trying to bust us up and it will not work. I swear this. She can go straight to hell. Thanks dragonflyy for your support, I appreciate it.
2007-11-07 09:46:10 · answer #1 · answered by The Dark Prince 3 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Well, I know what to think. I think you did a very good job writing about a tired subject. A job good enough to make me forget the subject and just enjoy the reading. Vent on, if it makes you write this well. Huggles n Squeezles.
Dondi
2007-11-06 22:07:21 · answer #2 · answered by Dondi 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
thats a liar,
it is called my fallen prince,
and it goes lik ethis,
ode my fallen prince
my teeth i rinse
because ever since
my mind was mince
so i guess you are all that is left
beatiful has left,
so when we all die
we will then find out why
so iguess yuor hope is gone
but here is a new one
if god is real, how do we know he doesnt just hate us a nd lie to use
just becuase,
it is something we can caryy in our mind
and after all he made us all.?
we are all little pablo picassos, arent we, so you i will never see, so who else could i be
so dont ever think me but just count what you see
flat as my life
i cured my strife>
2007-11-06 20:37:05 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 2⤋
very good...
but a Prince...a Dark Prince...and a gun?
err? why not use a dagger or a sword or something...anything but a gun, a baseball bat is not good either ok?
2007-11-06 20:30:22 · answer #4 · answered by Anonymous · 0⤊ 0⤋
I like poems that rhyme. But they don't have to. It's beautiful.
2007-11-06 20:29:02 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
Too "telly"
2007-11-06 20:46:56 · answer #6 · answered by anautumnrayne 3 · 0⤊ 1⤋