Having chosen A/S Biology & A/S Psychology, I wish to become a medical doctor in future. I have also chosen A/S French & A/S English Literature because I enjoy learning foreign languages & I like reading and studying plays and novels.
2007-11-06 05:18:29 · 8 answers · asked by God,You Are Worthy To Be Praised 3 in Education & Reference ➔ Teaching
NO. Write thus...
My decision to become a medical doctor has led me to choose A/S Biology and A/S Psychology. However, because of how much I enjoy linguistics, literature and theater, I have also enrolled in A/S French and A/S English Literature.
Good luck with it!
2007-11-06 06:15:59 · answer #1 · answered by Banjo and Sullivan 6 · 2⤊ 0⤋
Don't do the "&" write it out. You also forgot a "the".... I wish to become a medical doctor in the future. You can also split your last sentence: I have also chosen A/S French and A/S English Literature because I enjoy learning foreign languages. Furthermore, I also like reading and studying plays and novels.
One other idea is to write out the 'A/S' instead of just putting the abbreviation. "I have chosen advanced placement french and advanced placement english...."
Other than that it looks and sounds good.
Lots of luck!
2007-11-06 05:54:39 · answer #2 · answered by iwish4love 4 · 1⤊ 0⤋
It should be- I wish to become a medical doctor in the future. Put a period after languages and start a new sentence. I also like reading and studying plays and novels.
2007-11-06 05:29:16 · answer #3 · answered by Anonymous · 1⤊ 0⤋
It is written like someone who is not completely familiar with English.
Say what A/S is. Subjects are not capitalized unless they are proper nouns. "In future" is not good English. You should say "in THE future." Ampersands (&) are not used in formal writing. You should use the word "and". The last sentence should be 2 sentences. These changes are just to make it grammatically correct. Even after you make the corrections, the style and content is still questionable.
2007-11-06 05:29:05 · answer #4 · answered by jonmm 4 · 2⤊ 1⤋
only one thing, you missed a 'the' in 'become a medical doctor in future' it ought to be 'become a medical doctor in the future'
2007-11-06 05:27:04 · answer #5 · answered by Anonymous · 2⤊ 1⤋
Suggest put 'the' in between 'in' and 'future'.
2007-11-06 05:29:58 · answer #6 · answered by BB 7 · 1⤊ 0⤋
Yes it is fine. No corrections needed
2007-11-06 05:23:52 · answer #7 · answered by crave knowledge 7 · 1⤊ 4⤋
change "&" to "and"
2007-11-06 05:50:07 · answer #8 · answered by Early Cuyler 2 · 1⤊ 0⤋